World In Exile

topic posted Sat, March 10, 2007 - 11:46 PM by  dorien

WORLD IN EXILE

In a labyrinth of lies
And misguided humor
We search the skies
For ships to appear
Our visitors glide
And part the clouds
On the moon they hide
From curious crowds
How can we smile?
When those in control
Condemn us to exile
From the galactic whole
How can we jeer?
When what seems evident
Is met with fear,
Mockery, and descent
A web of deceit
Captures the blind
It’s meant to defeat
The inquisitive mind

Escaping from me
Is the laughing cry
Or the crying glee
I look to the sky
Our people in exile
Cling to their fears
Our world in exile
Sheds not her blinders
A dizzy head swims
In a bleak horror show
Like cold winter hymns
On a rainy tableau

-D.C.
posted by:
dorien
Portland
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    Re: World In Exile

    Thu, July 19, 2007 - 6:47 PM
    very catchy cadence to this. i also like that it confounded my expectations, two lines in, when I thought this was going to be some angst-y moan-y thing. Thing it changed gear into a nicely unconventional subject. And very lyrically handled, for all that. Kudos.
  • Re: World In Exile

    Fri, July 20, 2007 - 1:42 PM
    Karmic Stream

    Ripples
    along the lazy stream of time
    crossing the whirlwind of space
    rippling crevices
    in the contours of my mind.
    Expecting miracles.
    One day precedes the next.
    I am reminded of a
    faultless day in spring.
    Next I know I am hauling logs
    in winter
    cold, icy hands and feet
    dripping nose
    exhausted and wilting.

    There are no promises.
    None to hold them to.
    There are no changelings of the night
    not even aliens to remove us.
    There is energy
    There is form
    There is shadow receding
    into substance.
    There is here and now receding
    into there and then.
    There are the promises we keep
    never knowing we have made them.

    Ripples
    shining in the sun
    colours of a thousand worlds' rainbows.
    Ripples quietly receding
    infinitely regressing
    first cause
    last effect.

    (c) Feb. 18, 2006 Laurie Corzett

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