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What about the true energetic meaning from which words came - and have you seen where the colloquial use often is almost opposite from that? Would this possibly create confusion? Might that be the intention?
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Re: The energy behind the word
Wed, March 19, 2008 - 10:09 AMmy favorite writing device
is to use a commonly known word
and use it in a correct but uncomfortable context -
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Re: The energy behind the word
Thu, March 20, 2008 - 6:30 AMThat's interesting. How do you mean? -
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Re: The energy behind the word
Thu, March 20, 2008 - 9:02 AMHere is a not so good example
but it works nonetheless
"He stands transfixed on the middle plateau between the top and bottom of a bipartisan staircase. Above him are his dreams in a loft bedroom without walls. Below is reality, and work, and life set at different levels from a living space and workroom to a cargo elevator into the city. "
"Bipartisan" is comfortably used
to describe a political system
rather than a staircase.
All peer critiques have had difficulties with it
and suggest other words;
however, bipartisan also represents a choice
as does the staircase in the story.
Not just of up or down
but of dreams or life, memories or work,
past or present, republican or democrat.
i will see if i can find another example.
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