The energy behind the word

topic posted Thu, January 3, 2008 - 2:32 PM by  ed
What about the true energetic meaning from which words came - and have you seen where the colloquial use often is almost opposite from that? Would this possibly create confusion? Might that be the intention?
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    Re: The energy behind the word

    Wed, March 19, 2008 - 10:09 AM
    my favorite writing device
    is to use a commonly known word
    and use it in a correct but uncomfortable context
    • Re: The energy behind the word

      Thu, March 20, 2008 - 6:30 AM
      That's interesting. How do you mean?
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        Re: The energy behind the word

        Thu, March 20, 2008 - 9:02 AM
        Here is a not so good example
        but it works nonetheless

        "He stands transfixed on the middle plateau between the top and bottom of a bipartisan staircase. Above him are his dreams in a loft bedroom without walls. Below is reality, and work, and life set at different levels from a living space and workroom to a cargo elevator into the city. "

        "Bipartisan" is comfortably used
        to describe a political system
        rather than a staircase.
        All peer critiques have had difficulties with it
        and suggest other words;
        however, bipartisan also represents a choice
        as does the staircase in the story.
        Not just of up or down
        but of dreams or life, memories or work,
        past or present, republican or democrat.

        i will see if i can find another example.

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